Monday, September 2, 2013
Bully Response paragraph
In the powerful documentary Bully by Lee Hirsch, the continual affliction of bullied children is exemplified through the lives of Alex, Ja’ Meya, and Tyler as they all respond to their situations in different ways. Being picked on, physically abused, and teased can affect a person so much, it can cause them to turn into somebody else entirely. Children who are constantly treated as useless will eventually begin to harden their hearts and believe it. For example, one of the kids who Hirsch interviewed was a 12 year-old boy named Alex. For his whole life, the only people who ever accepted him and loved him were his family. Throughout elementary, middle school, and high school, Alex was seen as “different” and was treated as such. Kids punched him, threatened him, called him names, and abused him to the point where he was emotionless. Being interviewed about his circumstances, Alex responded, “I’m starting to think I don’t feel anything anymore.” Years of never-ending desecration without the support of one real friend had taken away parts of his humanity. “They push me so far that I want to become the bully.”- Alex. Those words are similar to the very reaction of a 14 year-old girl named Ja’ Meya. She became so tired of being threatened by boys on the bus that she stole her mother’s gun and brought it with her the next time she rode it. Some boys tackled her before she could fire, and she was sent to juvenile hall. Nobody was hurt in this case, but a 17 year-old boy named Tyler was not so lucky. After being terrorized for over 10 years because he was nonathletic, Tyler eventually took his own life. You see, these experiences are so damaging that they will cause a child to lose their innocence and react in a way that they never normally would. “I’m different- not normal. I belong somewhere else.” These are words that should never come out of the mouth of anyone, much less children. Yet they are said, along with much more, by many. To conclude, bullying will bring out parts of people that should be left unprovoked, and it not only damages their emotions, but it also damages the heart.
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Where is your opinion statement/ argumentative point in your topic sentence? Make sure to take a stand that you are arguing and going to prove. Then use the examples you stated to support your position. Quotes should be incorporated as part of sentences not standing alone. Great work retelling the emotion. Now we need to use that to fuel your arguments.
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